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Creep: Sexist Buford is sexist.
Kit:...Eh, if the dialog is right, I wouldn’t really call that sexist. Just Buford poking fun in that Phineas STILL DOESN’T GET IT. Apparently.
Creep: Ah, then I take that back then.
Erik: *sigh* Are we finally done with this stupid filler? I mean how long has it been stretched out now?
Kit: Ah, I think we have one more filler-Phinbella moment to sit through, and THEN we’re done.
Creep: And oh my god, it’s far worst.
Erik: ...If this next song is romantic Disney Song Imma be pissed.
Kit: *laughs evilly* >D
Creep: *chuckles* >3
Erik: As long as it’s not “Can You Feel the Love Tonight” or “Kiss the Girl”, I think I can live.
Kit: *laughs twice as evilly*
Creep: …...
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Kit: *laughs evilly at everyone else’s expense* XD
Creep: Goddammit, Ferb, why do you care?!
Kit: Ahem...Ok, this would actually be semi-romantic if they were actually near a body of water. But it’s just random here.
Erik: ….*loads gun* Same rules as last time. Next RP character to enter this critique gets shot.
Creep: Nope. XDDD SERIOUSLY, “Kiss the Girl”?!
Erik: *facedesk*
Creep: Why the hell does Ferb give a shit?!
Erik: Even Isabella seems confused. Why the hell is Ferb singing a solo?! God damn it! Why?!
Creep: Maybe Ferb’s just annoyed about his stupid-ass brother and basically just tried get it over with.
Erik: It makes no sense, Ferb has been talking too much as it is. Now singing?! He’s older, shouldn’t be be quieter than ever?
Creep: *snort* Please.....
Erik: ?
Kit: *shrugs* I don’t see the problem with Ferb talking more. But I do see the problems with Ferb suddenly being a random shipper.
Creep: I see reasons for Ferb to suddenly give conversations willy-nilly.
Erik: ...I was honestly hoping he would sing “Be Prepared!”
Kit: Yeah, that would have been cool. x3 No matter the song, I will give props for the bad-ass shades. CX
Creep: Kit’s inner fangirl is talking again.
Kit: Yeah, it is. X3
Creep: I just hate Ferb just talking and talking when ONCE AGAIN, he’s established as a man of action!
Kit: I still have high doubts that he’ll remain silent and mute forever. I mean, yeah, he IS cool when he doesn’t talk - it leaves room for him to do awesome things faster - but, ya know...him talking is kinda cool.
Creep: But the reason he’s so cool is because of his silence; you take that away, you take away what makes Ferb him.
Kit: *nods* Yeah, I understand your point. =3 Maybe it’s just a personal thing for me to like him having dialog.
Erik: I just really hate it happening as a teen, considering kids are much more talkative than they are when they get older.
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Erik: And...the filler...keeps...fucking....going.
Creep: Oh....so apparently Phineas has feelings, but is too much of a pussy to actually commit.
Erik: DUDE! This filler has been going on since Page 64 if you only count when they start singing...that’s nearly 20 pages of filler so far!
Creep: DX
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Creep: UGH, Paola, go the fuck AWAY!!!!!
Erik: ...Urgh God, imagine if you had been annoying during the Izz Z Factor...just fucking imagine that....
Kit: How many times does she do this in the comic? = =
Creep: I dunno, it’s probably been like over 20 times so far....
Erik: ! Did you say...20 times?
Creep: OVER 20 times....
Erik: That reminds me! *sends up fireworks* Congratulations, Pao! 20 pages of filler in a ROW! It’s a new record!
Creep: Also, of course, more fuckin’ Phinbella nonsense.
Erik: Wait a minute...that’s another record! Most annoying character in a comic! (Pao)
Creep: To be fair, this is STILL better than WI.
Erik: Not only that, worst A/N abuse ever seen in a comic or general fiction for that matter! That’s THREE NEW RECORDS! Hold on, three records? That’s the most records done in one day! ANOTHER record!
Kit:...No, no I’ve see worse =w= *laughs at blatant refference* X3
Creep: Where?
Kit: I think it was a fanfiction; long-ass time ago. There were A/Ns like...every other sentence.
Erik: ...For it to be worse than Paos, it would have to have a AN after every damn sentence or something.
Kit: Hence my previous statement.
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Creep: Oh...NOW Buford gives a fuck.
Erik: First Ferb...and NOW BUFORD SHIPS PHINBELLA?! BULLSHIT!
Kit: See Baljeet gets it. Why is Baljeet the only sane man here?!
Erik: ...Why does he have a black eye? When has Buford ever been this physical?
Kit: I think Buford hit him at some point...? And to answer your question; never, I don’t think, outside of wedgies and noogies.
Creep: Well....he IS a bully....but outside of wedgies and wet-willies, no.
Erik: Name one time he’s hit Baljeet. No shoulder punches. They don’t count.
Creep: ...none.
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Erik: ...And...it’s STILL GOING ON!
Creep: ...FUCKING KISS ALREADY! END THE FUCKING SUSPENSE SO WE CAN MOVE ON!!!!!! Ugh, this is almost making me hate Phinbella. DX
Kit: *looks over the page again and sighs*...I remember when I LIKED this page. It was all romantic and stuff I liked way back when.
Creep: I’ve seen better romances.
Kit: Yeah, that was back before I realized what counted as good romance...before I had sense.
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Creep: *sigh*
Erik: And it STILL GOES ON!
Creep: Actually......I liked this page. >///////<
Kit: Part of me still likes it, despite the Phinbella. Though, for me, it’s mostly on an artistic level. It’s nicely drawn, while some other pages look like storyboard doodles.
Erik: Urgh...the obvious cocktease is annoying
Creep: The art’s nice.
Erik: True. At least Pao didn’t add herself in this time....
Creep: I’d find it funny if Phineas actually poked her eye out. XD
Kit: Yeah, me too. XDD
Erik: Oh yeah, I did that in my fic...kinda stupid....
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Creep: CANDACE COCKBLOCK!
Erik: FINALLY FUCK!
Creep: But it’s not over.....
Kit: But there goes Pao again.
Erik: That filler took nearly 25 pages!!! TWENTY-FIVE!!!!!
Creep: Pao, shut up. Tell the story instead of telling me your fuckin’ reaction. YOU MADE IT. Also, where did Phin’s and Isabella’s eyes go?
Erik: That’s almost a sixth of the damn comic! And yeah...that is disturbing....
Kit: To answer your question, CreepE, it’s some kind of Manga effect. I don’t understand it, really. Usually, it’s when people’s bangs shadow out their eyes, but given they both kind of lack bangs that would do that...9~9
Erik: Since when does Candace tell Phineas to shut up?
Creep: Again, P&F ISN’T A ANIME! And it’s not like Paola never drew it as anime to begin it.
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Creep: OH, so Candace IS watching the boys.
Erik: Urgh...alright...this comic is starting to sink into WI territory. There’s too damn much Phinbella.
Kit: But at least something interesting is finally happening. Thank you, jesus! It only took us...how many pages again?
Creep: Eh....to be fair, this is the starting out for their relationship...unlike WI where Phinbella basically have no point in the story and takes over Canderemy story.
Erik: It’s just too much. Even The Beak didn’t focus on Phinbella this much.
Creep: But at least Phinbella has...an excuse to focus on it; it’s basically how they hooked up.
Erik: I could deal with it....if it just wasn’t so dramatic....=/ And...thought out.
Creep: ...sorry bro, but I STILL hate WI!Phinbella than this comic’s Phinbella, bro.
Erik: Me too, but this is starting to get there too. We just had a sixth of the comic be filler and it’s too dramatic and everyone cares about this WAY too much. I wanna just see Isabella and Phineas for their hookup.
Creep: I’ll give this comic credit considering there’s more....you know EFFORT in this comic compared to WI.
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Erik: See?! SEE?! This is what I mean! Ferb, dude, shut the hell up, damn it!
Creep: DX One line! Why can he have one line and that’s it? Even a speech would be fine if he didn’t keep fuckin’ talking! DX
Erik: This is pissing me off...Pao is basically sacrificing the characters just so she can see Phineas and Isabella hook up. No, damn it, no!
Kit:.....Yeah, I know what I said about Ferb having dialog, but even I don’t think he should have a whole friggin’ wall of text. <<< Is a hypocrite *planned shit like this for her own stories*...Well...a wall of text over SHIPPING. 9~9 If it’s over something that CALLS for it, that’s one thing. Shipping does not call for it.
Creep: Ugh. DX
Erik: ...Urgh...nobody cares about Phinbella but Isabella. Why does everyone suddenly care?! DX
Creep: In Paola’s world, Phinbella is basically the whole universe.
Kit:...But why? What makes Phinbella so special? 0 o
Creep: I’m a HUGE Phinbella fan and even I don’t care about it THAT much.
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Creep: I swear to God, Paola is driving me to murder bunnies. DX
Kit: “Things between future brothers”? Wha? 0 o Was that just a sloppy translation or something?
Erik: Damn it, Pao, shaddup! How many pages has she shown up on now? 50?
Creep: I actually lost count. DX
Erik: And I think she meant “Siblings”.
Kit: Ah.
Erik: Dramatic Phinbella confrontation commence!
Creep: You’re gonna love Phin in the next page....
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Creep: Dear God, Phin. DX You’re a fuckin’ PUSSY.
Erik: DAMN IT, PAO!!! I swear, this is just too much. If you wanted him to call earlier...have him call earlier! You write the damn story!
Creep: Ugh, you’re the AUTHOR! Stop fangirling over your OWN DAMNED SHIT!
Kit: Again, getting really sick of the A/Ns...
Erik: It’s really conceited too...her comic is not this exciting and honestly, I am bored from it.
Creep: Authors are suppose to keep their feelings and opinions away from the story! TELL THE STORY.
Erik: Wonder how long the comic would be without the filler and the stupid ANs.
Creep: *shrugs* Around 80 pages?
Erik: Sounds about right...XD
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Erik: Did Isabella seriously just strip nude and change outside in a backyard full of boys? O.o
Creep: ….
Kit: No, I think she went inside.
Erik: ...She’s clearly outside though.
Creep: Also, Baljeet got punched....AGAIN. And bro, the last page had Isabella going into the house.
Erik: You can see the bushes behind her!
Creep: ….no, I think that’s just Paola’s crappy-ass backgrounds. The last page was her walking into the house.
Erik: ....Well....OK...but that looks like a bush...0.0’
Creep: Also, what the fuck did Baljeet get punched for?
Erik: Telling Buford that Ferb likes romance novels. What the hell is up with Buford?
Creep: ….WHHUUUUU? Is Buford just....o.o Oh my goodness....Buford has become Suzy.
Erik: Joy...=/
Creep: Think about it; not only does she abhor girls, she abhor romance entirely. Just like how Suzy acted in WI.
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Erik: Now see, this disturbs me...Phineas is in the bathroom, so Isabella can’t be....also, hello Emo Phineas. It’s nice to see you again.
Creep: And I hate it when Phin becomes so over-dramatic like this.
Erik: “Izzy” ...This comic fails officially now.
Kit: Well, he IS acting a BIT out of character, but, to be fair, he’s understandably confused by what just happened. He’s just not used to that kind of stuff and has little experience in it...but...don’t take my word for that. |D
Creep: You know, regardless of him CLEARLY thinking about Isabella even more so. Not to mention, there IS a way to make him not be so fuckin’ over-dramatic and have him still be confused.
Kit: True, I’m just saying there’s a POINT behind it this time.
Creep: I know. But even after like discovering Perry’s true identity in AT2D, his anger and sadness never got in his way in the rest of story. In fact, it pretty much died out towards the middle of the movie.
Kit: Yeah; once he got a moment to cool down and think about it. But, I’m not arguing. I agree with your point. |D
Erik: God even on the AC, Pao is spazzing out over nothing.
Creep: Ugh....stop fangirling over your OWN SHIT! DX
Erik: No wonder people spazz over it, Pao sure knows how to start a bleeding pep rally.
Creep: She is shallow enough for it. I wouldn’t be surprised if there WAS a pep rally in “Chaos Through Time”.
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Erik: ...You have some shitty electric plan if 4 plugs causes a blackout.
Creep: What the hell? What is that...thing drying her hair?
Erik: Future?
Creep: Couldn’t be; it’s only a couple of years. And it looks NOTHING of futuristic.
Kit: Technology can advance that fast with Phineas and Ferb around. |3 *joking; really does agree*
Creep: And this doesn’t get Candace to attempt busting the boys?
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Erik: ...4 plugs causes an overload?
Creep: I have more shit plugged in right now! *looks around* Yeah, I got power.
Kit: It shows four things getting plugged in with the space Pao had on the page. I counted 6 items around Candace.
Erik: It shows 4. Well...right now...as a lower middle class college student I have....*counts*....18 things plugged in my room alone.
Creep: LAME.
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Creep: Yes, save us Doofenshmirtz!
Erik: ….Why does Perry care about this? It’s not illegal.
Creep: Again, he’s foiled non-evil things of Doof’s before.
Erik: Name a plan he foiled that caused no damage to anyone.
Creep: The Pick-Em-Up-Inator was solely invented to pick up Vanessa.
Erik: He didn’t foil that until Doof decided to abuse it. Before that, he was cool with just hanging out with Doof.
Creep: ...
Kit: Yeah, that was a cool episode. |D
Creep: Perry does have a cool way of escaping said trap.
Kit: See, we could have gotten to this point, like...20 pages ago if the filler was removed.
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Doggy: goof! goof!
Erik: Dafuq sound is that dog making?
Creep: Reference to Goofy? XD
Erik: Goofy? Goofy isn’t a dog.
Creep: Yeah he is. Put him up next to Pluto.
Erik: No. Pluto is a dog. Goofy can drive and shit. And look at those teeth.
Creep: Goofy’s a dog-man while Pluto IS a dog.
Erik: Those are not dog teeth.
Creep: They both have the same ears and head-design.
Erik: Also, doesn’t he have a relationship with that cow-person girl?
Creep: Clarabelle? Yeah, she’s clearly a cow....and he’s a DOG.
Erik: But they pair Mickey with a mouse, Donald with a duck....what the hell IS Goofy?
Creep: A DOG. He has the same design as Pluto, only he has clothes and stands.
Erik: He can’t be a dog. He acts like a person. What would make him special?
Creep: So? I’ve seen Mickey, Donald and Goofy interacted with other non-talking animals.
Erik: But he’s with a cow...maybe...he’s a domestic bull?
Creep: I’ve seen a non-talking cow before! How the fuck is he a bull?
Erik: But he looks sorta like the cow too but with no horns. He doesn’t have dog teeth either.
Creep: He has dog ears.
Erik: They look the same as cow ears. Maybe he just got neutered as a calf.
Creep: Goofy doesn’t have anything cow-related. He has no horns and he has a BLACK NOSE which bulls do not have.
Erik: Maybe he’s an animal that starts with “G”. “Donald Duck” “Mickey Mouse” “Goofy...Goober”? I get it! He’s a peanut!
Creep: …..moving on--what the hell are we doing? We’re supposed to be critiquing! XD
Erik: Yeah...sorry.....XD
Kit: Yeah, you guys have been prattling on for a while. |3
Creep: Anyway, Doof’s inator finds its way to the Flynns house, etc.
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Erik: ...Does Linda look younger now?
Creep: Holy fuck, she looks even younger than in WI.
Erik: Naaaahhhh...not that young....
Kit: Oi, Linda’s hair looks big.
Creep: But her eyes and face is smaller than on the show.
Kit: Again; pages ago, the art was rather impressive. Now they look like storyboard doodles again.
Erik: C’mon, this still looks younger doesn’t it?
Kit: I dunno, I think she’s kind of starting to age a bit. Though...I’m not an expert on that, so I’ll take your word for it.
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Creep: At least Linda’s face is slightly bigger in WI; here she kinda looks like a teenager with that face.
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Erik: Yeah, NOW Linda definitely looks younger.
Kit: Yeah, I’ll admit that she does look younger here.
Creep: And Candace goes wacky....which is something.
Erik: At least it feels more like the show. Urgh...remember WI? A Candace that doesn’t bust....
Kit: Yeah, it does feel more like the show. :3 Although, to be fair, the WI Candace is getting married; she kind of has other priorities. |D
Creep: Yeah, but she actually gave UP the chance of busting her brothers the day BEFORE her wedding. The ironic thing is that Doof didn’t invent anything inators, so if she actually gave it to Mom, she would have busted them.
Kit:...I think that was the idea. |D
Creep: Worsened by the fact that Candace actually GIVES UP BUSTING at the end of this comic.
Erik: SHE DOES?! I don’t remember that!
Kit: I don’t remember that either. 0 0
Creep: Paola told me this in the little chatroom dilemma that she does this and this is why Candace doesn’t bust her brother at all in WI.
Erik: URRRGHHHHH....
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Creep: Did Baljeet’s hair get poofier? XD
Kit: I think it did. It looks like popcorn. |D
Erik: Why are they randomly talking to themselves
Crepe: Because......I dunno.
Kit: It needs some kind of narration? |3
Creep: To be fair, at least it’s not one of Paola’s annoying-ass AN’s.
Kit: Yeah, don’t get used to that. |3 *looked ahead like a cheap-ass*
Creep: Erik? Is that all you have to say?
Erik: Yeah. Not much to say...
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Erik: And RIGHT OF THE BAT, there she is! The annoying pimple of this comic.
Creep: *non-impressed tone* And look. There’s Phineas and Isabella meeting each other in a totally not obviously cliche matter.
Kit: I know I said I wasn’t going to be as enthusiastic anymore, but.....ugh. = = Trying to be fairer to this comic, and I STILL find her random inserts annoying.
Erik: ...Why does she draw herself so desperate? I know she IS desperate, but don’t you wanna show yourself with some dignity?
Kit: You know what I think it is? I think it’s some kind of a joke or some weird form of humor to get the audience to laugh as though she was viewing this herself.
Creep: It doesn’t work.
Kit: Worked when I shipped Phinbella. |D
Erik: ...To be fair, nothing in this comic is that funny either.
Creep: ….well, there’s more effort in this comic. At least more so compared...heheheh...to WI.
Kit: I think we get the idea, Creep. XD PP > WI. |3
Creep: You’re gonna have to deal with it; I honestly hate WI more than Marie. YES, I said that. XD
Kit: Hey, so do I. |3 But repeating it gets old after a while. CX
Erik: I still hate Marie more. But I agree, WI is the sperm of the devil compared to this.
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Kit: *le gasp* What’s this?...something that’s actually FUNNY? D8...No, it can’t be.
Creep: ….<--admittingly likes this part. And now for cliche screaming in 3....2...1...
Erik: ...I didn’t believe you when I first saw you claiming it was funny....but I guess that was kinda humorous...XD
Creep: Well, compared to everything else in this comic, this is probably as funny as it’s going to get, so....take it or leave it.
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Erik: And there it is.
Kit: |D Behold; the ONLY funny part of this comic...instantly getting sweeped aside for Phinbella.
Creep: I do have to question Candace’s part; it’s clearly Baljeet.
Erik: ...Why are Isabella’s pants so baggy? I mean really, I’m amazed they aren’t falling down around her.
Creep: That would be cliche....and probably funny. XD
Erik: XD
Kit: I don’t know if it’s the pants that are baggy or her that’s so damn skinny!
Creep: Nothing more classic than a pant-falling. XD
Erik: A little sexual for P&F, but at least it would be funny unlike Pao’s excuse to see Phineas take off his clothes.
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Erik: SHE WAS OUTSIDE!
Creep: XDDDD
Erik: And there’s something she needs to tell him....
Isabella: Baljeet is the Father.
Phineas: O.O
Olivia: WWWHHUUUU? So Quinn’s part Indian?
Erik: Actually, he’s just a mutant clone. Look at that head! Lacie is your true sibling.
Olivia: That would explain how ugly Quinn is. XD
Creep: *rimshot*
Kit: *laughs at everything above* XDD Well, actually this is all mostly Phinbella, and--Hang on. I just noticed something. Has anyone else noticed that whenever Phinbella is on screen, the quality suddenly increases by...a lot? But whenever it’s not, they look like storyboard doodles?
Creep: ….yeah, actually. O.o
Erik: The quality increases? ...Wait, you mean the art?
Kit: That, how it’s drawn; the art itself.
Creep: Suddenly, the art gets more detailed and more clear compared to everyone else.
Erik: ...Typical, Pao.
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Erik: I’m sorry, but I’m just getting distracted by how skimpy that outfit is. Holy crap, could Isabella be more desperate?
Kit: Only Jay is allowed to dress that skimpy. XDD *bricked*
Creep: Of course Phineas pulls Isabella into a hug.
Erik: Every single thing seems to exist to somehow contribute to Phinbella one way or another.
Kit: Though, to be fair, Baljeet was about to run into her. |D He had a valid reason outside of being horny.
Creep: Just wait for the next page.....
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Creep: ...have you noticed we’ve suddenly abandoned the whole slumber party story?
Erik: ...The Doof story seems pretty...neglected to. At least she left her AN in the Artist Comment this time.
Kit: Yep. *notices Isabella looks even skinnier from this angle* Daaaaamn. I know this is a cartoon, but by Phineas and Ferb physics, she looks impossibly skinny!...and why does Phineas look like he went through Willy Wonka’s Taffy Stretcher? I just noticed that he’s ridiculously tall.
Erik: Why are they both looking down? It’s like Isabella just realized Phineas has a boner.
Kit: For all we know, given Pao’s use of logic in this comic, he probably does!
Creep: Isabella as a KID has more meat than she does has a teen! And yeah, he’s suddenly become Jack Skellington; he does have a growth spurt in the show, but....why does Phineas and Ferb become almost taller everyone in a few years?
Erik: Rule of Sue.
Creep: I mean, they’re both as taller as Doof and compare that to AT2D they were barely half his height! Now...they’re debate tall as Doof or even more.
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Erik: Whuuuu?
Kit: Ok, I take back what I said earlier...this is KIND OF funny. =w= Maybe it’s just Jeremy’s expression. I mean, imagine if you went to your girlfriend’s house to propose to them, and she suddenly bursts through the door in that outfit and dashes by you. |D
Creep: No, I swear I saw this sort of thing from an anime.
Erik: ...Yeah, Candace drawn without a face, I’ve seen this on SEVERAL animes and I rarely watch anime to begin with. Right of the bat I can say I’ve seen this on Naruto, Pokemon, Yu-gi-oh, and Inuyasha
Kit: Well, yeah, the face in shadows thing...again, this is in the style of a manga, so it’s not surprising.
Creep: The problem is that....P&F’s not an manga; it’s not even in the STYLE of manga.
Erik: Has Pao ever considered putting her talents to...I don’t know...an anime or manga fanbase? I think it’s suit her better.
Kit: I swear, if she did, she’d probably excel in it.
Creep: P&F does NOT fit in her jurisdiction.
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Creep: YAY, DOOF! <3
Kit: Woo! 83 Back to sanity. :3
Creep: And again, I’m still incredibly happy that he’s got some hint of age. I don’t get why this was SO hard for Paola to do in WI. Draw tiny lines around his eyes and BOOM! Hints of age.
Erik: ...Wait...I thought Candace sucked at skating. Also the lights just came back out and people are speaking, so why not...I don’t know...call?
Kit: She probably got better over the years. |3
Creep: She got better? Also, Erik, she got hit with Doof’s Silence-Inator, remember?
Kit: Yeah, she lost her voice a while ago. |D
Erik: So did everyone else. But Phineas and Isabella were suddenly able to speak and so did Baljeet.
Kit:...Huh? No, only she did. 0 o
Creep: No, I saw Candace getting hit, not the kids.
Erik: But Phineas made a point in “saying” that he couldn’t hear himself or anyone else.
Kit: When was this? 0 o
Erik: In the dark when he was fixing the fuse box, I think.
Kit: ...
Creep: THE POWER OF LOVE COMPELS INATORS!
Kit: Sure. |D
Creep: ...that’s fuckin’ lame.
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Creep: Yes, even Doof points out this, but then again, he’s had non-evil inventions before! >.<Erik: Name one machine that did not end up being use for an evil purpose.
Creep: ….I SWEAR, he does invent at least ONE invention.
Erik: Well here’s the thing...he made the age inator (I think that’s the name) for cheese making reasons. Then he got pissed off and used it for evil.
Creep: Oh well, inventions for his ORIGINAL intentions.
Erik: Actually...there’s one I didn’t get...there was the giant robot made to make hand shadows...dunno what was so bad about that unless you count the fact it was being use for revenge.
Creep: Exactly. In this case, we mean an inventions that was ORIGINALLY not used for evil.
Erik: ...In this case, this invention is just helpful. I mean surely the neighbors don’t want that dog keep them up either. Isnt’ Doof kinda helping everyone here?
Creep: ...I dunno.
Erik: Counted pages, this thing is gonna be roughly 60+ pages long. XD
Kit: Perry’s job is to thwart, so twart he must!
Creep: Yes....THWARTING......XDDDD
Erik: And he is gonna thwart him hard.
Creep: Thwart him hard and fast.
Kit: =w= You’re doing that on purpose.
Erik: He’s going to thwart him all night if he has to.
Creep: Hehehe, that’s for all the Perryshmirtz fans out there.
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Kit: Hey, those horror stories DO appear in here...for one page.
Erik: Nope...movies...and way to steal a joke for Quantum Boogaloo...>.<
Creep: Again...LAME.
Kit: I don’t get it. |D...Oh, the five dimensions thing? Oh, c’mon, guys. XD Now you’re just nitpicking.
Creep: Well, that IS the point of critiquing...to NITPICK.
Erik: I’m a nitpick. I nitpick the hell out of everything.
Kit: Not the point. |D Just because they use “five dimensions” doesn’t mean it’s stealing a joke. |D In the episode, it was bumper cars. If Pao had said “four dimensions”, we wouldn’t be here, would we? |D
Erik: I <3 nitpicking. And as if Pao knows what 5-dimension truly means....
Kit: Hey, I don’t. |3
Erik: Exactly, and you have at least twice her brainpower.
Creep: Anyway, LAME. Moving on.....
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Kit: Can we pick a scenario and stick with it, please? Stop flip flopping between everything. The Phinbella will have more meaning if you just STAY WITH THE DRAMATIC SCENE instead of randomly throwing comedy in there.
Creep: UGH. DX MOAR PHINBELLA?! I’m getting so fuckin’ annoyed....
Erik: Holy shit! I thought she was gonna start suckling his breasts or something by the look on that one panel!
Creep: ...wait, what? Phineas has been in love with Isabella....since he was a KID?
Kit:....What? |D
Erik: <--Wrote that in his fanfiction too. >.<
Kit:.....<--slightly disturbed, but ok with it somehow
Creep: <--never considered Phineas was in love with Isabella the whole time
Erik: I’m sorry, but does Isabella somehow feel like a 5 year old in panel 5?
Creep: LAME.
Kit: Well, ya know, it’s basically her kid head on a teen body, so that’s an easy mistake to make. |D...It’s basically the same Isabella if you added breasts. I swear, I have a feeling she’d cut her friggin’ hair at SOME point....She’d look cute with short hair. =3
Creep: Oh and hi Paola! Fancy seeing you popping into the comic AGAIN. DX
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Erik: ...And yeah, let’s bring some more drama in....
Creep: To be fair, the build-up to the next few Phinbella pages are...genuinely decent.
Kit: My disdain for the pairing aside, this was what made me like it; it had genuine development. It really feels like they’re in love, even if I personally don’t believe it from my perception of Phineas.
Creep: After Phineas talks about his feelings, it’s not only nice and sweet, but they’re both in-characters. Not NOW, but later...they do.
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Erik: Why not just...grab a napkin and write it down?
Kit: But that wouldn’t be as silly. =3
Creep: To be fair, this..is kinda funny. You know, Candace being a fool as usual.
Kit: This has more funny moments than I remember. =3
Erik: Yeah, it has way more humor than WI. And this does feel...P&Fish.
Creep: So, Paola, we CAN say good things about your crap, okay?
Pao: NO! YOU’RE EVIL SPAWN OF THE DEVIL’S SEED! GO TO HELL!
Creep: Sure....I am. *eyeroll*
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Erik: ...Technically, wouldn’t making her thing they were sick have her go home? Why not just stay with that?
Creep: Well...it is Candace, Erik; she doesn’t always think things through.
Kit: Yeah. |D And that’s what we love about her. =3
Erik: Oh well, this is still decent.
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Erik: ...Phineas looks like he’s about to propose. O.o
Creep: He’s just sitting on the couch. XD
Erik: Panel 3 XD
Kit: *analyzes it*....I dunned see it. |3
Creep: More DRAMA.
Erik: Imagine if Michael Bay got his hand on this....XD
Creep: ….*explodes*
Erik: Yeah pretty much. Isabella’s cleavage would also be more exaggerated...and shoot lasers.
Creep: Off track, bro.
Erik: You brought up drama
XD
Kit: *just laughing at the images coming to mind* XDDD
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Erik: China called, they want their wall back.
Kit: And once again, the quality instantly increases again.
Creep: This is a comic book, not a essay! >.<
Erik: And...not a single sentence sounds like it would come from P&F.
Kit: And something about Phin’s entire monologue just doesn’t sit right with me...
Creep: You know how rare Isabella as a kid is drawn by Pao?
Kit: How rare?
Erik: I...never noticed that....
Creep: There’s maybe 3 pictures she’s ever drawn that’s NOT Isabella as a teen.
Kit:...Why? ): She’s cute as a little girl. =3
Erik: Because teen Izzy gets action.
Creep: Plus, Paola uses the teenage stuff as an excuse for more Phinbella.
Pao:
Erik: That whole wall of text though...that sounded nothing like Phineas. At all. This sounds like your typical sitcom. But Phineas? No. I couldn’t think of a single character on the show sounding like this.
Creep: Suddenly I’m imagining cliche sitcom music for dramatic moments.
Kit: *starts playing the Full House music* =w=
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Erik: And it’s still going....
Creep: Who’s the random shaded girl Phin’s talking to?
Erik: A random fangirl...yes the fangirls stretch as far as page 118. There is no escape.
Kit: Random girl used for example as to how little the other girls mean to Phineas. =w=
Erik: Or Pao is too lazy to draw in a character...
Creep: And holy fuck, does Isabella EVER stop blushing?
Kit: I think it’s just to make her look cute or something.
Creep: I do like blushing girls, but this is just overdose.
Erik: ...This is overdone. Just looking at her funny would cause her to blush. Imagine what their marriage is like....
Creep: WHAT MAKES THE RED MAN RED????
Kit:...Good heavens.
Phineas: Can you pass the butter?
Isabella: *blushes* OooOOOooooOoooo PHINEAS! *orgasm*
Creep: WHAT MAKES THE RED GIRL RED????
Erik: *suddenly gets it* XD
Creep: I don’t care how offensive it is; it’s still damned catchy. XD
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Erik: ...And...she kisses him? He’s feeling sick and unsure...and she kisses him?
Creep: Chicks dig sickos.
Erik: Why didn’t she does this outside? There’s no way Candace seeing them scared her, because she was all for kissing him in front of all their friends.
Kit: Wild guess; her way of trying to comfort him.
Creep: Eh.
Erik: If anything, I’d say doing that would make him more nervous. Maybe try holding his hand?
Kit: Eh, sure, but they’re hormonal teens. |D
Creep: They’re both just horny.
Kit: Either way, they have an excuse. |3
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Erik: SEE?! It DOES make him feel uncomfortable!
Kit: I know, I know. I’m just saying that wasn’t Isabella’s intentions. |3
Erik: OWNED!!! *glomps in victory*
Creep: Ugh, come on, Isabella! >.< Quit blushing! You’re literally gonna turn into the red man!
Erik: If she is so easily embarrassed, why did she CHANGE OUTSIDE?!??!
Creep: XD Also, where are the other guys? Where’s Ferb? Where’s Buford? Where’s Baljeet?
Erik: Who cares at this point? Not Pao. It’s straight Phinbella from here. And she’s loving every second of it.
Creep: Well, after they had so many moments....and being on the frikkin’ cover, I assumed they had a role in this.
Erik: Their role was to make a story she could ship Phinbella with.
Kit:.....Isabella looks far too innocently cutesy in that second to last panel for my liking...= =
Creep: So...that’s where Marie gets it from. That ONE panel is all the cuteness from Marie. But moving on....
Erik: Absolute cuteness corrupts absolutely.
Creep: Sexist Buford is sexist.
Kit:...Eh, if the dialog is right, I wouldn’t really call that sexist. Just Buford poking fun in that Phineas STILL DOESN’T GET IT. Apparently.
Creep: Ah, then I take that back then.
Erik: *sigh* Are we finally done with this stupid filler? I mean how long has it been stretched out now?
Kit: Ah, I think we have one more filler-Phinbella moment to sit through, and THEN we’re done.
Creep: And oh my god, it’s far worst.
Erik: ...If this next song is romantic Disney Song Imma be pissed.
Kit: *laughs evilly* >D
Creep: *chuckles* >3
Erik: As long as it’s not “Can You Feel the Love Tonight” or “Kiss the Girl”, I think I can live.
Kit: *laughs twice as evilly*
Creep: …...
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Kit: *laughs evilly at everyone else’s expense* XD
Creep: Goddammit, Ferb, why do you care?!
Kit: Ahem...Ok, this would actually be semi-romantic if they were actually near a body of water. But it’s just random here.
Erik: ….*loads gun* Same rules as last time. Next RP character to enter this critique gets shot.
Creep: Nope. XDDD SERIOUSLY, “Kiss the Girl”?!
Erik: *facedesk*
Creep: Why the hell does Ferb give a shit?!
Erik: Even Isabella seems confused. Why the hell is Ferb singing a solo?! God damn it! Why?!
Creep: Maybe Ferb’s just annoyed about his stupid-ass brother and basically just tried get it over with.
Erik: It makes no sense, Ferb has been talking too much as it is. Now singing?! He’s older, shouldn’t be be quieter than ever?
Creep: *snort* Please.....
Erik: ?
Kit: *shrugs* I don’t see the problem with Ferb talking more. But I do see the problems with Ferb suddenly being a random shipper.
Creep: I see reasons for Ferb to suddenly give conversations willy-nilly.
Erik: ...I was honestly hoping he would sing “Be Prepared!”
Kit: Yeah, that would have been cool. x3 No matter the song, I will give props for the bad-ass shades. CX
Creep: Kit’s inner fangirl is talking again.
Kit: Yeah, it is. X3
Creep: I just hate Ferb just talking and talking when ONCE AGAIN, he’s established as a man of action!
Kit: I still have high doubts that he’ll remain silent and mute forever. I mean, yeah, he IS cool when he doesn’t talk - it leaves room for him to do awesome things faster - but, ya know...him talking is kinda cool.
Creep: But the reason he’s so cool is because of his silence; you take that away, you take away what makes Ferb him.
Kit: *nods* Yeah, I understand your point. =3 Maybe it’s just a personal thing for me to like him having dialog.
Erik: I just really hate it happening as a teen, considering kids are much more talkative than they are when they get older.
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Erik: And...the filler...keeps...fucking....going.
Creep: Oh....so apparently Phineas has feelings, but is too much of a pussy to actually commit.
Erik: DUDE! This filler has been going on since Page 64 if you only count when they start singing...that’s nearly 20 pages of filler so far!
Creep: DX
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Creep: UGH, Paola, go the fuck AWAY!!!!!
Erik: ...Urgh God, imagine if you had been annoying during the Izz Z Factor...just fucking imagine that....
Kit: How many times does she do this in the comic? = =
Creep: I dunno, it’s probably been like over 20 times so far....
Erik: ! Did you say...20 times?
Creep: OVER 20 times....
Erik: That reminds me! *sends up fireworks* Congratulations, Pao! 20 pages of filler in a ROW! It’s a new record!
Creep: Also, of course, more fuckin’ Phinbella nonsense.
Erik: Wait a minute...that’s another record! Most annoying character in a comic! (Pao)
Creep: To be fair, this is STILL better than WI.
Erik: Not only that, worst A/N abuse ever seen in a comic or general fiction for that matter! That’s THREE NEW RECORDS! Hold on, three records? That’s the most records done in one day! ANOTHER record!
Kit:...No, no I’ve see worse =w= *laughs at blatant refference* X3
Creep: Where?
Kit: I think it was a fanfiction; long-ass time ago. There were A/Ns like...every other sentence.
Erik: ...For it to be worse than Paos, it would have to have a AN after every damn sentence or something.
Kit: Hence my previous statement.
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Creep: Oh...NOW Buford gives a fuck.
Erik: First Ferb...and NOW BUFORD SHIPS PHINBELLA?! BULLSHIT!
Kit: See Baljeet gets it. Why is Baljeet the only sane man here?!
Erik: ...Why does he have a black eye? When has Buford ever been this physical?
Kit: I think Buford hit him at some point...? And to answer your question; never, I don’t think, outside of wedgies and noogies.
Creep: Well....he IS a bully....but outside of wedgies and wet-willies, no.
Erik: Name one time he’s hit Baljeet. No shoulder punches. They don’t count.
Creep: ...none.
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Erik: ...And...it’s STILL GOING ON!
Creep: ...FUCKING KISS ALREADY! END THE FUCKING SUSPENSE SO WE CAN MOVE ON!!!!!! Ugh, this is almost making me hate Phinbella. DX
Kit: *looks over the page again and sighs*...I remember when I LIKED this page. It was all romantic and stuff I liked way back when.
Creep: I’ve seen better romances.
Kit: Yeah, that was back before I realized what counted as good romance...before I had sense.
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Creep: *sigh*
Erik: And it STILL GOES ON!
Creep: Actually......I liked this page. >///////<
Kit: Part of me still likes it, despite the Phinbella. Though, for me, it’s mostly on an artistic level. It’s nicely drawn, while some other pages look like storyboard doodles.
Erik: Urgh...the obvious cocktease is annoying
Creep: The art’s nice.
Erik: True. At least Pao didn’t add herself in this time....
Creep: I’d find it funny if Phineas actually poked her eye out. XD
Kit: Yeah, me too. XDD
Erik: Oh yeah, I did that in my fic...kinda stupid....
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Creep: CANDACE COCKBLOCK!
Erik: FINALLY FUCK!
Creep: But it’s not over.....
Kit: But there goes Pao again.
Erik: That filler took nearly 25 pages!!! TWENTY-FIVE!!!!!
Creep: Pao, shut up. Tell the story instead of telling me your fuckin’ reaction. YOU MADE IT. Also, where did Phin’s and Isabella’s eyes go?
Erik: That’s almost a sixth of the damn comic! And yeah...that is disturbing....
Kit: To answer your question, CreepE, it’s some kind of Manga effect. I don’t understand it, really. Usually, it’s when people’s bangs shadow out their eyes, but given they both kind of lack bangs that would do that...9~9
Erik: Since when does Candace tell Phineas to shut up?
Creep: Again, P&F ISN’T A ANIME! And it’s not like Paola never drew it as anime to begin it.
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Creep: OH, so Candace IS watching the boys.
Erik: Urgh...alright...this comic is starting to sink into WI territory. There’s too damn much Phinbella.
Kit: But at least something interesting is finally happening. Thank you, jesus! It only took us...how many pages again?
Creep: Eh....to be fair, this is the starting out for their relationship...unlike WI where Phinbella basically have no point in the story and takes over Canderemy story.
Erik: It’s just too much. Even The Beak didn’t focus on Phinbella this much.
Creep: But at least Phinbella has...an excuse to focus on it; it’s basically how they hooked up.
Erik: I could deal with it....if it just wasn’t so dramatic....=/ And...thought out.
Creep: ...sorry bro, but I STILL hate WI!Phinbella than this comic’s Phinbella, bro.
Erik: Me too, but this is starting to get there too. We just had a sixth of the comic be filler and it’s too dramatic and everyone cares about this WAY too much. I wanna just see Isabella and Phineas for their hookup.
Creep: I’ll give this comic credit considering there’s more....you know EFFORT in this comic compared to WI.
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Erik: See?! SEE?! This is what I mean! Ferb, dude, shut the hell up, damn it!
Creep: DX One line! Why can he have one line and that’s it? Even a speech would be fine if he didn’t keep fuckin’ talking! DX
Erik: This is pissing me off...Pao is basically sacrificing the characters just so she can see Phineas and Isabella hook up. No, damn it, no!
Kit:.....Yeah, I know what I said about Ferb having dialog, but even I don’t think he should have a whole friggin’ wall of text. <<< Is a hypocrite *planned shit like this for her own stories*...Well...a wall of text over SHIPPING. 9~9 If it’s over something that CALLS for it, that’s one thing. Shipping does not call for it.
Creep: Ugh. DX
Erik: ...Urgh...nobody cares about Phinbella but Isabella. Why does everyone suddenly care?! DX
Creep: In Paola’s world, Phinbella is basically the whole universe.
Kit:...But why? What makes Phinbella so special? 0 o
Creep: I’m a HUGE Phinbella fan and even I don’t care about it THAT much.
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Creep: I swear to God, Paola is driving me to murder bunnies. DX
Kit: “Things between future brothers”? Wha? 0 o Was that just a sloppy translation or something?
Erik: Damn it, Pao, shaddup! How many pages has she shown up on now? 50?
Creep: I actually lost count. DX
Erik: And I think she meant “Siblings”.
Kit: Ah.
Erik: Dramatic Phinbella confrontation commence!
Creep: You’re gonna love Phin in the next page....
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Creep: Dear God, Phin. DX You’re a fuckin’ PUSSY.
Erik: DAMN IT, PAO!!! I swear, this is just too much. If you wanted him to call earlier...have him call earlier! You write the damn story!
Creep: Ugh, you’re the AUTHOR! Stop fangirling over your OWN DAMNED SHIT!
Kit: Again, getting really sick of the A/Ns...
Erik: It’s really conceited too...her comic is not this exciting and honestly, I am bored from it.
Creep: Authors are suppose to keep their feelings and opinions away from the story! TELL THE STORY.
Erik: Wonder how long the comic would be without the filler and the stupid ANs.
Creep: *shrugs* Around 80 pages?
Erik: Sounds about right...XD
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Erik: Did Isabella seriously just strip nude and change outside in a backyard full of boys? O.o
Creep: ….
Kit: No, I think she went inside.
Erik: ...She’s clearly outside though.
Creep: Also, Baljeet got punched....AGAIN. And bro, the last page had Isabella going into the house.
Erik: You can see the bushes behind her!
Creep: ….no, I think that’s just Paola’s crappy-ass backgrounds. The last page was her walking into the house.
Erik: ....Well....OK...but that looks like a bush...0.0’
Creep: Also, what the fuck did Baljeet get punched for?
Erik: Telling Buford that Ferb likes romance novels. What the hell is up with Buford?
Creep: ….WHHUUUUU? Is Buford just....o.o Oh my goodness....Buford has become Suzy.
Erik: Joy...=/
Creep: Think about it; not only does she abhor girls, she abhor romance entirely. Just like how Suzy acted in WI.
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Erik: Now see, this disturbs me...Phineas is in the bathroom, so Isabella can’t be....also, hello Emo Phineas. It’s nice to see you again.
Creep: And I hate it when Phin becomes so over-dramatic like this.
Erik: “Izzy” ...This comic fails officially now.
Kit: Well, he IS acting a BIT out of character, but, to be fair, he’s understandably confused by what just happened. He’s just not used to that kind of stuff and has little experience in it...but...don’t take my word for that. |D
Creep: You know, regardless of him CLEARLY thinking about Isabella even more so. Not to mention, there IS a way to make him not be so fuckin’ over-dramatic and have him still be confused.
Kit: True, I’m just saying there’s a POINT behind it this time.
Creep: I know. But even after like discovering Perry’s true identity in AT2D, his anger and sadness never got in his way in the rest of story. In fact, it pretty much died out towards the middle of the movie.
Kit: Yeah; once he got a moment to cool down and think about it. But, I’m not arguing. I agree with your point. |D
Erik: God even on the AC, Pao is spazzing out over nothing.
Creep: Ugh....stop fangirling over your OWN SHIT! DX
Erik: No wonder people spazz over it, Pao sure knows how to start a bleeding pep rally.
Creep: She is shallow enough for it. I wouldn’t be surprised if there WAS a pep rally in “Chaos Through Time”.
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Erik: ...You have some shitty electric plan if 4 plugs causes a blackout.
Creep: What the hell? What is that...thing drying her hair?
Erik: Future?
Creep: Couldn’t be; it’s only a couple of years. And it looks NOTHING of futuristic.
Kit: Technology can advance that fast with Phineas and Ferb around. |3 *joking; really does agree*
Creep: And this doesn’t get Candace to attempt busting the boys?
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Erik: ...4 plugs causes an overload?
Creep: I have more shit plugged in right now! *looks around* Yeah, I got power.
Kit: It shows four things getting plugged in with the space Pao had on the page. I counted 6 items around Candace.
Erik: It shows 4. Well...right now...as a lower middle class college student I have....*counts*....18 things plugged in my room alone.
Creep: LAME.
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Creep: Yes, save us Doofenshmirtz!
Erik: ….Why does Perry care about this? It’s not illegal.
Creep: Again, he’s foiled non-evil things of Doof’s before.
Erik: Name a plan he foiled that caused no damage to anyone.
Creep: The Pick-Em-Up-Inator was solely invented to pick up Vanessa.
Erik: He didn’t foil that until Doof decided to abuse it. Before that, he was cool with just hanging out with Doof.
Creep: ...
Kit: Yeah, that was a cool episode. |D
Creep: Perry does have a cool way of escaping said trap.
Kit: See, we could have gotten to this point, like...20 pages ago if the filler was removed.
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Doggy: goof! goof!
Erik: Dafuq sound is that dog making?
Creep: Reference to Goofy? XD
Erik: Goofy? Goofy isn’t a dog.
Creep: Yeah he is. Put him up next to Pluto.
Erik: No. Pluto is a dog. Goofy can drive and shit. And look at those teeth.
Creep: Goofy’s a dog-man while Pluto IS a dog.
Erik: Those are not dog teeth.
Creep: They both have the same ears and head-design.
Erik: Also, doesn’t he have a relationship with that cow-person girl?
Creep: Clarabelle? Yeah, she’s clearly a cow....and he’s a DOG.
Erik: But they pair Mickey with a mouse, Donald with a duck....what the hell IS Goofy?
Creep: A DOG. He has the same design as Pluto, only he has clothes and stands.
Erik: He can’t be a dog. He acts like a person. What would make him special?
Creep: So? I’ve seen Mickey, Donald and Goofy interacted with other non-talking animals.
Erik: But he’s with a cow...maybe...he’s a domestic bull?
Creep: I’ve seen a non-talking cow before! How the fuck is he a bull?
Erik: But he looks sorta like the cow too but with no horns. He doesn’t have dog teeth either.
Creep: He has dog ears.
Erik: They look the same as cow ears. Maybe he just got neutered as a calf.
Creep: Goofy doesn’t have anything cow-related. He has no horns and he has a BLACK NOSE which bulls do not have.
Erik: Maybe he’s an animal that starts with “G”. “Donald Duck” “Mickey Mouse” “Goofy...Goober”? I get it! He’s a peanut!
Creep: …..moving on--what the hell are we doing? We’re supposed to be critiquing! XD
Erik: Yeah...sorry.....XD
Kit: Yeah, you guys have been prattling on for a while. |3
Creep: Anyway, Doof’s inator finds its way to the Flynns house, etc.
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Erik: ...Does Linda look younger now?
Creep: Holy fuck, she looks even younger than in WI.
Erik: Naaaahhhh...not that young....
Kit: Oi, Linda’s hair looks big.
Creep: But her eyes and face is smaller than on the show.
Kit: Again; pages ago, the art was rather impressive. Now they look like storyboard doodles again.
Erik: C’mon, this still looks younger doesn’t it?
Kit: I dunno, I think she’s kind of starting to age a bit. Though...I’m not an expert on that, so I’ll take your word for it.
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Creep: At least Linda’s face is slightly bigger in WI; here she kinda looks like a teenager with that face.
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Erik: Yeah, NOW Linda definitely looks younger.
Kit: Yeah, I’ll admit that she does look younger here.
Creep: And Candace goes wacky....which is something.
Erik: At least it feels more like the show. Urgh...remember WI? A Candace that doesn’t bust....
Kit: Yeah, it does feel more like the show. :3 Although, to be fair, the WI Candace is getting married; she kind of has other priorities. |D
Creep: Yeah, but she actually gave UP the chance of busting her brothers the day BEFORE her wedding. The ironic thing is that Doof didn’t invent anything inators, so if she actually gave it to Mom, she would have busted them.
Kit:...I think that was the idea. |D
Creep: Worsened by the fact that Candace actually GIVES UP BUSTING at the end of this comic.
Erik: SHE DOES?! I don’t remember that!
Kit: I don’t remember that either. 0 0
Creep: Paola told me this in the little chatroom dilemma that she does this and this is why Candace doesn’t bust her brother at all in WI.
Erik: URRRGHHHHH....
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Creep: Did Baljeet’s hair get poofier? XD
Kit: I think it did. It looks like popcorn. |D
Erik: Why are they randomly talking to themselves
Crepe: Because......I dunno.
Kit: It needs some kind of narration? |3
Creep: To be fair, at least it’s not one of Paola’s annoying-ass AN’s.
Kit: Yeah, don’t get used to that. |3 *looked ahead like a cheap-ass*
Creep: Erik? Is that all you have to say?
Erik: Yeah. Not much to say...
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Erik: And RIGHT OF THE BAT, there she is! The annoying pimple of this comic.
Creep: *non-impressed tone* And look. There’s Phineas and Isabella meeting each other in a totally not obviously cliche matter.
Kit: I know I said I wasn’t going to be as enthusiastic anymore, but.....ugh. = = Trying to be fairer to this comic, and I STILL find her random inserts annoying.
Erik: ...Why does she draw herself so desperate? I know she IS desperate, but don’t you wanna show yourself with some dignity?
Kit: You know what I think it is? I think it’s some kind of a joke or some weird form of humor to get the audience to laugh as though she was viewing this herself.
Creep: It doesn’t work.
Kit: Worked when I shipped Phinbella. |D
Erik: ...To be fair, nothing in this comic is that funny either.
Creep: ….well, there’s more effort in this comic. At least more so compared...heheheh...to WI.
Kit: I think we get the idea, Creep. XD PP > WI. |3
Creep: You’re gonna have to deal with it; I honestly hate WI more than Marie. YES, I said that. XD
Kit: Hey, so do I. |3 But repeating it gets old after a while. CX
Erik: I still hate Marie more. But I agree, WI is the sperm of the devil compared to this.
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Kit: *le gasp* What’s this?...something that’s actually FUNNY? D8...No, it can’t be.
Creep: ….<--admittingly likes this part. And now for cliche screaming in 3....2...1...
Erik: ...I didn’t believe you when I first saw you claiming it was funny....but I guess that was kinda humorous...XD
Creep: Well, compared to everything else in this comic, this is probably as funny as it’s going to get, so....take it or leave it.
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Erik: And there it is.
Kit: |D Behold; the ONLY funny part of this comic...instantly getting sweeped aside for Phinbella.
Creep: I do have to question Candace’s part; it’s clearly Baljeet.
Erik: ...Why are Isabella’s pants so baggy? I mean really, I’m amazed they aren’t falling down around her.
Creep: That would be cliche....and probably funny. XD
Erik: XD
Kit: I don’t know if it’s the pants that are baggy or her that’s so damn skinny!
Creep: Nothing more classic than a pant-falling. XD
Erik: A little sexual for P&F, but at least it would be funny unlike Pao’s excuse to see Phineas take off his clothes.
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Erik: SHE WAS OUTSIDE!
Creep: XDDDD
Erik: And there’s something she needs to tell him....
Isabella: Baljeet is the Father.
Phineas: O.O
Olivia: WWWHHUUUU? So Quinn’s part Indian?
Erik: Actually, he’s just a mutant clone. Look at that head! Lacie is your true sibling.
Olivia: That would explain how ugly Quinn is. XD
Creep: *rimshot*
Kit: *laughs at everything above* XDD Well, actually this is all mostly Phinbella, and--Hang on. I just noticed something. Has anyone else noticed that whenever Phinbella is on screen, the quality suddenly increases by...a lot? But whenever it’s not, they look like storyboard doodles?
Creep: ….yeah, actually. O.o
Erik: The quality increases? ...Wait, you mean the art?
Kit: That, how it’s drawn; the art itself.
Creep: Suddenly, the art gets more detailed and more clear compared to everyone else.
Erik: ...Typical, Pao.
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Erik: I’m sorry, but I’m just getting distracted by how skimpy that outfit is. Holy crap, could Isabella be more desperate?
Kit: Only Jay is allowed to dress that skimpy. XDD *bricked*
Creep: Of course Phineas pulls Isabella into a hug.
Erik: Every single thing seems to exist to somehow contribute to Phinbella one way or another.
Kit: Though, to be fair, Baljeet was about to run into her. |D He had a valid reason outside of being horny.
Creep: Just wait for the next page.....
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Creep: ...have you noticed we’ve suddenly abandoned the whole slumber party story?
Erik: ...The Doof story seems pretty...neglected to. At least she left her AN in the Artist Comment this time.
Kit: Yep. *notices Isabella looks even skinnier from this angle* Daaaaamn. I know this is a cartoon, but by Phineas and Ferb physics, she looks impossibly skinny!...and why does Phineas look like he went through Willy Wonka’s Taffy Stretcher? I just noticed that he’s ridiculously tall.
Erik: Why are they both looking down? It’s like Isabella just realized Phineas has a boner.
Kit: For all we know, given Pao’s use of logic in this comic, he probably does!
Creep: Isabella as a KID has more meat than she does has a teen! And yeah, he’s suddenly become Jack Skellington; he does have a growth spurt in the show, but....why does Phineas and Ferb become almost taller everyone in a few years?
Erik: Rule of Sue.
Creep: I mean, they’re both as taller as Doof and compare that to AT2D they were barely half his height! Now...they’re debate tall as Doof or even more.
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Erik: Whuuuu?
Kit: Ok, I take back what I said earlier...this is KIND OF funny. =w= Maybe it’s just Jeremy’s expression. I mean, imagine if you went to your girlfriend’s house to propose to them, and she suddenly bursts through the door in that outfit and dashes by you. |D
Creep: No, I swear I saw this sort of thing from an anime.
Erik: ...Yeah, Candace drawn without a face, I’ve seen this on SEVERAL animes and I rarely watch anime to begin with. Right of the bat I can say I’ve seen this on Naruto, Pokemon, Yu-gi-oh, and Inuyasha
Kit: Well, yeah, the face in shadows thing...again, this is in the style of a manga, so it’s not surprising.
Creep: The problem is that....P&F’s not an manga; it’s not even in the STYLE of manga.
Erik: Has Pao ever considered putting her talents to...I don’t know...an anime or manga fanbase? I think it’s suit her better.
Kit: I swear, if she did, she’d probably excel in it.
Creep: P&F does NOT fit in her jurisdiction.
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Creep: YAY, DOOF! <3
Kit: Woo! 83 Back to sanity. :3
Creep: And again, I’m still incredibly happy that he’s got some hint of age. I don’t get why this was SO hard for Paola to do in WI. Draw tiny lines around his eyes and BOOM! Hints of age.
Erik: ...Wait...I thought Candace sucked at skating. Also the lights just came back out and people are speaking, so why not...I don’t know...call?
Kit: She probably got better over the years. |3
Creep: She got better? Also, Erik, she got hit with Doof’s Silence-Inator, remember?
Kit: Yeah, she lost her voice a while ago. |D
Erik: So did everyone else. But Phineas and Isabella were suddenly able to speak and so did Baljeet.
Kit:...Huh? No, only she did. 0 o
Creep: No, I saw Candace getting hit, not the kids.
Erik: But Phineas made a point in “saying” that he couldn’t hear himself or anyone else.
Kit: When was this? 0 o
Erik: In the dark when he was fixing the fuse box, I think.
Kit: ...
Creep: THE POWER OF LOVE COMPELS INATORS!
Kit: Sure. |D
Creep: ...that’s fuckin’ lame.
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Creep: Yes, even Doof points out this, but then again, he’s had non-evil inventions before! >.<Erik: Name one machine that did not end up being use for an evil purpose.
Creep: ….I SWEAR, he does invent at least ONE invention.
Erik: Well here’s the thing...he made the age inator (I think that’s the name) for cheese making reasons. Then he got pissed off and used it for evil.
Creep: Oh well, inventions for his ORIGINAL intentions.
Erik: Actually...there’s one I didn’t get...there was the giant robot made to make hand shadows...dunno what was so bad about that unless you count the fact it was being use for revenge.
Creep: Exactly. In this case, we mean an inventions that was ORIGINALLY not used for evil.
Erik: ...In this case, this invention is just helpful. I mean surely the neighbors don’t want that dog keep them up either. Isnt’ Doof kinda helping everyone here?
Creep: ...I dunno.
Erik: Counted pages, this thing is gonna be roughly 60+ pages long. XD
Kit: Perry’s job is to thwart, so twart he must!
Creep: Yes....THWARTING......XDDDD
Erik: And he is gonna thwart him hard.
Creep: Thwart him hard and fast.
Kit: =w= You’re doing that on purpose.
Erik: He’s going to thwart him all night if he has to.
Creep: Hehehe, that’s for all the Perryshmirtz fans out there.
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Kit: Hey, those horror stories DO appear in here...for one page.
Erik: Nope...movies...and way to steal a joke for Quantum Boogaloo...>.<
Creep: Again...LAME.
Kit: I don’t get it. |D...Oh, the five dimensions thing? Oh, c’mon, guys. XD Now you’re just nitpicking.
Creep: Well, that IS the point of critiquing...to NITPICK.
Erik: I’m a nitpick. I nitpick the hell out of everything.
Kit: Not the point. |D Just because they use “five dimensions” doesn’t mean it’s stealing a joke. |D In the episode, it was bumper cars. If Pao had said “four dimensions”, we wouldn’t be here, would we? |D
Erik: I <3 nitpicking. And as if Pao knows what 5-dimension truly means....
Kit: Hey, I don’t. |3
Erik: Exactly, and you have at least twice her brainpower.
Creep: Anyway, LAME. Moving on.....
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Kit: Can we pick a scenario and stick with it, please? Stop flip flopping between everything. The Phinbella will have more meaning if you just STAY WITH THE DRAMATIC SCENE instead of randomly throwing comedy in there.
Creep: UGH. DX MOAR PHINBELLA?! I’m getting so fuckin’ annoyed....
Erik: Holy shit! I thought she was gonna start suckling his breasts or something by the look on that one panel!
Creep: ...wait, what? Phineas has been in love with Isabella....since he was a KID?
Kit:....What? |D
Erik: <--Wrote that in his fanfiction too. >.<
Kit:.....<--slightly disturbed, but ok with it somehow
Creep: <--never considered Phineas was in love with Isabella the whole time
Erik: I’m sorry, but does Isabella somehow feel like a 5 year old in panel 5?
Creep: LAME.
Kit: Well, ya know, it’s basically her kid head on a teen body, so that’s an easy mistake to make. |D...It’s basically the same Isabella if you added breasts. I swear, I have a feeling she’d cut her friggin’ hair at SOME point....She’d look cute with short hair. =3
Creep: Oh and hi Paola! Fancy seeing you popping into the comic AGAIN. DX
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Erik: ...And yeah, let’s bring some more drama in....
Creep: To be fair, the build-up to the next few Phinbella pages are...genuinely decent.
Kit: My disdain for the pairing aside, this was what made me like it; it had genuine development. It really feels like they’re in love, even if I personally don’t believe it from my perception of Phineas.
Creep: After Phineas talks about his feelings, it’s not only nice and sweet, but they’re both in-characters. Not NOW, but later...they do.
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Erik: Why not just...grab a napkin and write it down?
Kit: But that wouldn’t be as silly. =3
Creep: To be fair, this..is kinda funny. You know, Candace being a fool as usual.
Kit: This has more funny moments than I remember. =3
Erik: Yeah, it has way more humor than WI. And this does feel...P&Fish.
Creep: So, Paola, we CAN say good things about your crap, okay?
Pao: NO! YOU’RE EVIL SPAWN OF THE DEVIL’S SEED! GO TO HELL!
Creep: Sure....I am. *eyeroll*
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Erik: ...Technically, wouldn’t making her thing they were sick have her go home? Why not just stay with that?
Creep: Well...it is Candace, Erik; she doesn’t always think things through.
Kit: Yeah. |D And that’s what we love about her. =3
Erik: Oh well, this is still decent.
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Erik: ...Phineas looks like he’s about to propose. O.o
Creep: He’s just sitting on the couch. XD
Erik: Panel 3 XD
Kit: *analyzes it*....I dunned see it. |3
Creep: More DRAMA.
Erik: Imagine if Michael Bay got his hand on this....XD
Creep: ….*explodes*
Erik: Yeah pretty much. Isabella’s cleavage would also be more exaggerated...and shoot lasers.
Creep: Off track, bro.
Erik: You brought up drama
XDKit: *just laughing at the images coming to mind* XDDD
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Erik: China called, they want their wall back.
Kit: And once again, the quality instantly increases again.
Creep: This is a comic book, not a essay! >.<
Erik: And...not a single sentence sounds like it would come from P&F.
Kit: And something about Phin’s entire monologue just doesn’t sit right with me...
Creep: You know how rare Isabella as a kid is drawn by Pao?
Kit: How rare?
Erik: I...never noticed that....
Creep: There’s maybe 3 pictures she’s ever drawn that’s NOT Isabella as a teen.
Kit:...Why? ): She’s cute as a little girl. =3
Erik: Because teen Izzy gets action.
Creep: Plus, Paola uses the teenage stuff as an excuse for more Phinbella.
Pao:
Erik: That whole wall of text though...that sounded nothing like Phineas. At all. This sounds like your typical sitcom. But Phineas? No. I couldn’t think of a single character on the show sounding like this.
Creep: Suddenly I’m imagining cliche sitcom music for dramatic moments.
Kit: *starts playing the Full House music* =w=
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Erik: And it’s still going....
Creep: Who’s the random shaded girl Phin’s talking to?
Erik: A random fangirl...yes the fangirls stretch as far as page 118. There is no escape.
Kit: Random girl used for example as to how little the other girls mean to Phineas. =w=
Erik: Or Pao is too lazy to draw in a character...
Creep: And holy fuck, does Isabella EVER stop blushing?
Kit: I think it’s just to make her look cute or something.
Creep: I do like blushing girls, but this is just overdose.
Erik: ...This is overdone. Just looking at her funny would cause her to blush. Imagine what their marriage is like....
Creep: WHAT MAKES THE RED MAN RED????
Kit:...Good heavens.
Phineas: Can you pass the butter?
Isabella: *blushes* OooOOOooooOoooo PHINEAS! *orgasm*
Creep: WHAT MAKES THE RED GIRL RED????
Erik: *suddenly gets it* XD
Creep: I don’t care how offensive it is; it’s still damned catchy. XD
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Erik: ...And...she kisses him? He’s feeling sick and unsure...and she kisses him?
Creep: Chicks dig sickos.
Erik: Why didn’t she does this outside? There’s no way Candace seeing them scared her, because she was all for kissing him in front of all their friends.
Kit: Wild guess; her way of trying to comfort him.
Creep: Eh.
Erik: If anything, I’d say doing that would make him more nervous. Maybe try holding his hand?
Kit: Eh, sure, but they’re hormonal teens. |D
Creep: They’re both just horny.
Kit: Either way, they have an excuse. |3
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Erik: SEE?! It DOES make him feel uncomfortable!
Kit: I know, I know. I’m just saying that wasn’t Isabella’s intentions. |3
Erik: OWNED!!! *glomps in victory*
Creep: Ugh, come on, Isabella! >.< Quit blushing! You’re literally gonna turn into the red man!
Erik: If she is so easily embarrassed, why did she CHANGE OUTSIDE?!??!
Creep: XD Also, where are the other guys? Where’s Ferb? Where’s Buford? Where’s Baljeet?
Erik: Who cares at this point? Not Pao. It’s straight Phinbella from here. And she’s loving every second of it.
Creep: Well, after they had so many moments....and being on the frikkin’ cover, I assumed they had a role in this.
Erik: Their role was to make a story she could ship Phinbella with.
Kit:.....Isabella looks far too innocently cutesy in that second to last panel for my liking...= =
Creep: So...that’s where Marie gets it from. That ONE panel is all the cuteness from Marie. But moving on....
Erik: Absolute cuteness corrupts absolutely.
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Goofy is an "anthropomorphic" dog. And as for the whole animal-that-starts-with-g thing, his name use to be "Dippy Dog" but got changed to Goofus D. Dawg/Goofy "Goof" XD